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12:24 pm May 9, 2012
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… although, even moreso that usual, this one will likely be a letdown from the ruby-red tart that you just offered up…
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12:25 pm May 9, 2012
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… and to boot, new page 47 is here…
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12:26 pm May 9, 2012
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| Straight up G | posts 1709 | |
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… and with this page marker pic, I toast the overdue arrival of my…
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12:29 pm May 9, 2012
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12:30 pm May 9, 2012
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| Straight up G | posts 1709 | |
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… there are, of course, 500 chickens in that cartoon…
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12:31 pm May 9, 2012
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| Straight up G | posts 1709 | |
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… but I'm sure that you'll count for yourself to verify…
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12:31 pm May 9, 2012
| drmemory
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| Straight up G | posts 2908 | |
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DGB said:
… you're such a tease, what's the line…
geez, you'd think I needed encouragement or something…
remember, you asked for it, not my fault if yer disappointed
comes with a story (I''ll try to make it brief as possible)
long ago I went out with this cute redhead fer a while who just happened to have the finest rearview it has ever been my pleasure to ogle …no lie, the best although that's not really germane …she broke up with me n' moved away (poor me) …years later, I was putterin' around in a box of old junk n' ran across something that reminded me of her …hadn't thought of her in ages, but I did so then n' fondly …wondered whatever became of her …wondered if she ever wondered what became of me …had this strange idea (my specialty) – wouldn't it be weird if, after all those yrs, she just happened to be thinking about me at the same time I was thinking about her?
understand, I was not in love; if I had been, maybe she wouldna broke it off …but, like I sez, I got this strange idea: suppose I was in love, n' started wonderin' about my lost love, what would that be like …n' I came up with what I think it the best lyric I ever wrote …seriously, it's all about sincerity …when ya learn to fake that, ya got something…
Simultaneity
A trickle more of pink chablis
Laid in the lap of luxury
As I think of you, do you think of me
Is that Simultaneity?
I drink of you, I smell your hair
I know you love, I don't know where
If you drink too, of memory
Is that Simultaneity?
As I look back, do you recall?
Do you still turn at my footfall?
If I concur, do you agree?
Is that Simultaneity?
A final drop of pink chablis
Which once you sipped so daintily
As I miss you now, do you miss me?
Is that Simultaneity?
my keyboard player n' chief partner in songwriting crime came up with this really sweet ethereal flute setting but I don't believe we ever recorded it …we were just talking last night about mebbe gettin' an outfit together again n' if we ever get back in the studio, that's near the top o' my list…
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12:32 pm May 9, 2012
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… the other pic that I was strongly considering was this boozy one that would have worked pretty nicely…
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12:35 pm May 9, 2012
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… and now that that's taken care of, here's one more pic…
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12:35 pm May 9, 2012
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12:36 pm May 9, 2012
| DGB
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| Straight up G | posts 1709 | |
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… and now, with this post here, we're tied again…
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12:37 pm May 9, 2012
| drmemory
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| Straight up G | posts 2908 | |
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DGB said:
… although, even moreso that usual, this one will likely be a letdown from the ruby-red tart that you just offered up…
I like that! …nice phrasing!
of course, I'm in an editorial mood n' can't help but think it might even be better as cherry tart…
never pass up a double entendre…
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12:38 pm May 9, 2012
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Post edited 12:39 pm – May 9, 2012 by DGB
drmemory said:
DGB said:
… you're such a tease, what's the line…
geez, you'd think I needed encouragement or something…
remember, you asked for it, not my fault if yer disappointed
comes with a story (I''ll try to make it brief as possible)
long ago I went out with this cute redhead fer a while who just happened to have the finest rearview it has ever been my pleasure to ogle …no lie, the best although that's not really germane …she broke up with me n' moved away (poor me) …years later, I was putterin' around in a box of old junk n' ran across something that reminded me of her …hadn't thought of her in ages, but I did so then n' fondly …wondered whatever became of her …wondered if she ever wondered what became of me …had this strange idea (my specialty) – wouldn't it be weird if, after all those yrs, she just happened to be thinking about me at the same time I was thinking about her?
understand, I was not in love; if I had been, maybe she wouldna broke it off …but, like I sez, I got this strange idea: suppose I was in love, n' started wonderin' about my lost love, what would that be like …n' I came up with what I think it the best lyric I ever wrote …seriously, it's all about sincerity …when ya learn to fake that, ya got something…
Simultaneity
A trickle more of pink chablis
Laid in the lap of luxury
As I think of you, do you think of me
Is that Simultaneity?
I drink of you, I smell your hair
I know you love, I don't know where
If you drink too, of memory
Is that Simultaneity?
As I look back, do you recall?
Do you still turn at my footfall?
If I concur, do you agree?
Is that Simultaneity?
A final drop of pink chablis
Which once you sipped so daintily
As I miss you now, do you miss me?
Is that Simultaneity?
my keyboard player n' chief partner in songwriting crime came up with this really sweet ethereal flute setting but I don't believe we ever recorded it …we were just talking last night about mebbe gettin' an outfit together again n' if we ever get back in the studio, that's near the top o' my list…
… I know I asked for it, thanks… upon an initial read, I'm drawn to the second verse…
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12:38 pm May 9, 2012
| drmemory
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| Straight up G | posts 2908 | |
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DGB said:
… and to boot, new page 47 is here…
I seldom drink that much these days…
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12:39 pm May 9, 2012
| drmemory
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| Straight up G | posts 2908 | |
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DGB said:
… and with this page marker pic, I toast the overdue arrival of my…
cheers!
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12:40 pm May 9, 2012
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drmemory said:
DGB said:
… and to boot, new page 47 is here…
I seldom drink that much these days…
… well, when hanging out with Germans, sometimes one has little choice…
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12:41 pm May 9, 2012
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… yikes, fallen behind by 1, now we're tied again…
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12:42 pm May 9, 2012
| drmemory
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| Straight up G | posts 2908 | |
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12:43 pm May 9, 2012
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| Straight up G | posts 1709 | |
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… maybe this one will put me back in the lead, depending on whether or not you've made a post since I last posted…
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12:44 pm May 9, 2012
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… nope that one just tied us again, but this one will surely put me back in the lead…
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